I was still struggling to invent an alternate version of myself, someone proud and unflinching who could gaze levelly at his father and tell him his last secrets. I wanted him to know me; to have seen me. I'd been waiting until I was settled and fulfilled, so as to present myself in terms of a happiness he might understand.

Michael Cunningham
Profession: Novelist
Nationality: American
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Who has more power than a child? She can be as cruel as she wants to be. He can't.
As writers we must, from our very opening sentence, speak with authority to our readers.
This, Barrett Meeks, is your work. You witness, and compile. You persevere.
Our hopes may seem unrealized, but we were in all likelihood hoping for the wrong thing.